The new plot

Hello all, i did say that i am in the process of reworking the plot of "The False Cult"

Here it is. If you have any suggestions, please comment and i woul be very grateful.


Islamic extremists are thought to be responsible for a string of murders of high-ranking Roman Catholic clergy in London. Brutal murders of bishops headline the news. At the same time, unusual events begin to occur in and around London. Speculations arise that an underground society may be liable for these murders. The evidence is inconclusive. It’s now up to the Police and Leonard Helton to sift through the few clues to discover the startling truth of who is really behind these murders and what their real agenda is.


If I update the plot again i will inform you.

Thank you :)

A little preview

Here's a little section of the Prologue of my book. Please inform me if you do find it interesting.


<<“Going somewhere?” one man said to the Cardinal in a voice of disgust.
“Brand him!” shouted the master from the opposite side of the room.
A third man then appeared out of what seemed to be nowhere with a red-hot branding iron in his right hand. It looked like it had a symbol and some letters on it. One of the original two men started to unbutton the top of the Cardinals red cassock while the other held him down.
“I mark you, body and soul with this iron, may this remi…” said the man as his words faded into inaudible whispers. >>

By the Way,

In this blog i'll also post things that are not related to my book.

such as photographs and opinions relative to today's issues.

Greetings

Hello there.

My name is David and this blog is to serve as an Introduction to my book. "The False Cult"

Now, the book is still a work-in-progress, but if people show a keen interest in it, then i'll be inspired to finish it , more quickly.


Here is the old plot.

Plot
"The Archbishop of Westminster is brutally murdered and branded. Leonard is called upon to carry out a private investigation into the murder. All the signs indicate that an Islamic extremist group is responsible for the murder. More murders of Catholic bishops follow and strange activities now begin to occur all over London. On the scene of one of the murders, Leonard finds a clue; this new clue shatters his original suspicion and reveals an old group that was thought to have dissolved centuries ago. What is the true agenda for this Group? Will Leonard be able to stop them?"


However, since commencing writing, the direction of the book has strayed from this plot slightly.

I will keep you updated once i've rewritten the plot.